This started off very well Jack but the latter stages became a little descriptive - you've re-told a lot of the story.
It's also very similar to the other short that you've analysed in terms of the underpinning theme. The tempo of the editing also increases dramatically in both as the characters make the choices that precipitate their downfall.
This started off very well Jack but the latter stages became a little descriptive - you've re-told a lot of the story.
ReplyDeleteIt's also very similar to the other short that you've analysed in terms of the underpinning theme. The tempo of the editing also increases dramatically in both as the characters make the choices that precipitate their downfall.
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